Yuav ua li cas sau muaj zog thiab stylish: cov lus qhia rau aspiring poets

2024 Tus sau: Malcolm Clapton | [email protected]. Kawg hloov kho: 2023-12-17 03:58

Hais txog kev ua yeeb yam, muaj zog thiab tsis muaj zog rhyme thiab vim li cas cov kab zoo meej tsis yog qhov kev lees paub ntawm cov lus teb hauv tus ntsuj plig ntawm tus nyeem ntawv.

Koj txhais li cas "muaj zog" thiab "stylish"

Muaj zog - qhov no yog li ntawd nyob rau hauv lub taub hau ntawm tus nyeem ntawv ces cov kab no tau spinning. Yog li ntawd cov paj huam yog memorized thiab cawm los ntawm lawv. Yog li ntawd txhua zaj paj huam rau tus nyeem ntawv yog ib tug micro-illumination, ib tug clue ntawm txoj kev mus rau ib yam dab tsi siab.

Kuv yuav yeej koj rov qab los ntawm txhua lub teb chaws, los ntawm tag nrho cov saum ntuj ceeb tsheej, Vim hav zoov yog kuv lub txaj, thiab lub ntxa yog hav zoov.

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Stylish zoo ib yam li cov khaub ncaws. Xws li ib zaj paj huam suits lub temperament thiab lub neej kev ntawm tus sau, cov duab piav yog holistic, tsis muaj dab tsi tawm ntawm nws. Nws yog qhov txaus siab nyeem rau lwm tus, thiab lwm tus xav sau tib yam. Stylish paj huam sib haum mus rau lub sij hawm, tab sis yuav nyob twj ywm muaj feem xyuam rau "lub caij tom ntej". Feem ntau, koj nyob rau hauv leopard leggings, los yog nyob rau hauv ib lub tsho tiv no.

Cov ntawv nyeem ntawm tus neeg sau npe nyob rau hauv lub chaw ua hauj lwm sau npe hais txog "ships of love" thiab "ob tug fragile nkoj" tsis yog stylish. Cov paj huam los ntawm cov ntawv tshaj tawm rau hnub tseem ceeb - feem ntau, ib yam nkaus.

Vim hais tias xws li kab yuav tsum yog universal, hais ib txhij rau tag nrho cov pejxeem ntawm Lavxias teb sab Federation. Cov ntawv nyeem stylish tsuas yog tsim rau cov neeg tuaj saib nqaim xwb. (Los ntawm txoj kev, yog hais tias cov lus yog ob qho tib si stylish thiab "rau txhua tus neeg" - qhov no yog twb ingenious, classic.)

Thiab kuv kuj nyiam cov kab lus uas pom nyob rau hauv kev tes hauj lwm: "Muaj ib qho kev ntsuas: muaj goosebumps - tsis muaj goosebumps. Txhua yam. Thiab yog li ntawd hauv txhua yam."

Yuav tsum tau ua dab tsi los tsim paj huam zoo

Zoo li txhua tus kws tshaj lij, tus kws sau paj huam yuav tsum muaj "khoom siv". Koj tuaj yeem ua dab tsi los tiv thaiv koj cov paj huam los ntawm kev txav los ntawm kev pub?

1. Siv cov lus zoo nkauj

Tsis hais lus, tsis yog morphemic.

• "Kuv mus rau tus thawj coj" - tsis zoo heev.

  "Kuv taug kev - ib lub tais" - zoo.

• "Murlycha - whine" - tsis zoo heev.

  "Murlycha yog cov neeg raug tsim txom" (zoo li Marina Tsvetaeva's) yog qhov zoo.

Qhov zoo tshaj plaws, cov lus sib dhos yuav tsum yog qhov sib txawv ntawm kev hais lus. Yog hais tias lawv yog cov npe, ces lawv yuav tsum nyob rau hauv ntau rooj plaub.

Cia peb coj ob lub ntsiab lus ntawm cov lus sib dhos: "Yooj Yim - khoob - tsis muaj" thiab "Yooj Yim - los ntawm Rostov - Leo Tolstoy." Hauv ob qho xwm txheej, cov lus sib dhos yog qhov tseeb (lub suab sib txuam tsis yog los ntawm kev sib tsoo, tab sis kuj rau nws). Tab sis qhov piv txwv thib ob yog qhov nthuav ntau dua vim qhov tseeb tias qhov sib txawv ntawm kev hais lus lossis sib txawv yog siv.

2. Nco ntsoov suav cov lus

Yog, muaj ntau yam piv txwv ntawm kev ua tiav ntawm kev siv dawb loj. Tab sis tsuas yog cov kws sau paj huam muaj peev xwm them taus nws.

nws nyob rau hauv khau boots, nws yog tiptoe, liab qab

nws muaj ib nkawm khau hauv nws txhais tes nrog lub pob taws tawg

nws luag hnyav heev ces nws yuav luag choke nws Adas lub kua

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Nws feem ntau yog tam sim no meej uas yog siv cov poetic meter dawb paub meej, thiab leej twg yog tus tsis paub. Abstract artists muaj ib lub tsev kawm ntawv kev kawm. Yog tias koj tseem xav sau cov lus paj huam, koj thawj zaug yuav tsum paub txog cov txheej txheem classic.

3. Tuaj nrog cov lus piv txwv ncaj ncees

Thaum ib tug neeg qhia koj txog lawv lub hnub, nws yog qhov tseeb tam sim ntawd seb lawv puas yog kos duab lossis hais lus ncaj ncees. Coj tus cwj pwm tsis zoo los yog ua phooj ywg nrog koj. Qhov no kuj pom nyob rau hauv paj huam. Cov piv txwv yuav tsum tau "tshem tawm" los ntawm sab hauv, tsis yog coj los ntawm sab nraud. Nws yuav tsum yog tshwj xeeb, tsis dhuav. Yuav tsum muab lub siab txias txias los yog kev cia siab sov so.

• "Thiab ciab poob los ntawm lub teeb hmo ntuj mus rau lub hnav ris tsho nrog kua muag" (Boris Pasternak).
• "Lub caij nplooj zeeg ntawm lub neej, zoo li lub caij nplooj zeeg ntawm lub xyoo, yuav tsum tau txais txiaj ntsig zoo" (Eldar Ryazanov).

Nyob rau hauv ob qho tib si, tus piv txwv yog yooj yim "ua tsis taus pa", thiab tseem qhia cov huab cua ntawm qhov tshwm sim: los ntawm teeb pom kev zoo thiab huab cua kub mus rau qhov kev xav tob ntawm cov cim.

4. Ua phooj ywg nrog lus thiab tsim

Muaj ib qho kev tawm dag zog rau cov duab kos duab (tsim yog kuv txoj haujlwm tseem ceeb): piv txwv li, ntaus cov lus "zoo siab hnub tseem ceeb" thiab "terminator" hauv curly curls.

Nws yog tseeb rau lo lus twg lub typeface yog tsim nyog, thiab rau qhov uas nws tsim nyog hloov nws. Nws yog ib yam nrog lub ntsiab lus thiab daim ntawv.

Kev muaj peev xwm ua kom nkag siab cov lus dhau los ntawm tus kheej yuav pab ua kom cov lus thiab xav phooj ywg. Nws yog ib qho tsim nyog kom pom cov suab paj nruag uas tseem nyob hauv pob ntseg thaum nyeem cov paj huam nrov, thiab muab piv nrog lub ntsiab lus.

Qhov loj me kuj tseem ceeb (philosophical dactyl, tawm hauv qab, lossis ntseeg siab trochee), thiab phonetics, thiab txawm tias qhov chaw uas koj tuaj yeem ua pa thaum nyeem ntawv. Thiab ntawm no nws tsim nyog kuaj xyuas yog tias muaj cov lus tsis txaus ntseeg, tawm ntawm lub thawv hauv cov paj huam.

Yuav ua li cas txhim kho artistic saj

Raws li nws feem ntau tshwm sim hauv lub neej, cov kev cai saum toj no tsis meej, lawv muaj kev txwv ntawm daim ntawv thov thiab ntau qhov kev zam, thiab nws yuav tsis muaj peev xwm tsuas nco tau lawv. Txhawm rau siv cov cai ntawm paj huam hauv kev xyaum, koj yuav tsum muaj kev kos duab. Yuav txhim kho nws li cas?

1. Tsis txhob tso tseg kev kawm

Qhov no yog txoj kev yooj yim tshaj plaws. Cov tsev kawm qib siab zoo feem ntau tso lub hlwb kom txawm tias ib tus neeg nyob deb ntawm kev muaj tswv yim tuaj yeem paub qhov txawv ntawm cov kos duab tiag tiag los ntawm kitsch.

2. Nyeem phau ntawv zoo

Xav txog lub tswv yim ntawm Lavxias teb sab thiab txawv teb chaws classics. Ncua lus. Xav txog tias koj yuav tsum dhia dej tob npaum li cas.

3. Saib thiab mloog

Kev paub txog kev pleev xim thiab suab paj nruag yog qhov tseem ceeb sib npaug. Yog tias koj tau txais kev tshoov siab thiab tom qab sau paj huam raws li koj qhov kev xav ntawm kev kos duab lossis symphony, qhov no yuav tsis yog plagiarism. Thiab yog tias koj tsom mus rau cov kws sau paj huam nto moo, tus nyeem yuav yooj yim pom qhov no.

4. Tham nrog cov neeg txaus siab

Charismatic thiab cov neeg muaj zog pab lawv lub zej zog kev loj hlob. Qhov no kuj siv tau rau kev kos duab.

6 cov lus qhia ntxiv los ntawm kev paub txog tus kheej

1. Kawm kev paub suab paj nruag

Kawm kom hnov cov ntsuas poetic sib txawv, nyob ncua sijhawm, ua koj tus kheej cov kab. Ces koj yuav muaj cai hais tias koj cov paj huam muaj suab paj nruag.

2. Kawm lus txawv teb chaws

Koj yuav tsum paub lub ntsiab lus ntawm lub ntsiab qiv hauv paus kom tsis txhob nkag mus rau hauv kev ntxhov siab. Pib cov kws sau paj huam, ua npuas ncauj ntawm lub qhov ncauj, qhia qhov phem npaum li cas rau rhyme "boots" thiab "qho khau", thiab tam sim ntawd rhyme "voyage" thiab "bag".

3. Tsis txhob sau raws li lawv tau sau ua ntej koj

Tsis txhob ua qhov kev tshawb pom ntawm Asmeskas los ntawm qhov uas txhua tus neeg txaus siab twb xav. Xav txog ob zaug thaum, tom qab nchuav koj tus kheej ib co cocoa thiab qhwv koj tus kheej hauv daim pam, koj zaum sau txog lub caij nplooj zeeg. Xav tsis thoob li tsis muaj leej twg nyob hauv lub ntiaj teb no. Tsis yog Pushkin, lossis Tsvetaeva, lossis Polozkov.

4. Txhawb siab dawb paug thiab tsis pom kev

Tsis txhob tshaj tawm hauv cov ntawv sau ua ke them nyiaj: tsis muaj leej twg nyeem lawv, tsuas yog cov kws sau paj huam. Tsis txhob koom nrog cov vaj tsev dubious, uas muaj cov neeg tuaj koom ntau dua li cov neeg saib. Tsis txhob khav khav ntawm kev ua tswv cuab hauv cov koom haum sau ntawv: tag nrho tib yam, txhua tus tam sim no coj mus rau ntawd. Tsis txhob txhob txwm tshaj tawm kev tshuaj xyuas ntawm lwm tus kws sau paj huam hauv kev cia siab tias lawv yuav qhuas koj rov qab los.

Ob peb ntawm koj cov paj huam zoo tshaj plaws ntawm koj nplooj ntawv tus kheej txaus los pib. Yog tias cov kab ua tiav, yeej yuav muaj cov neeg uas yuav hais tias: "Yog lawm, qhov no yog qhov ci ntsa iab, Kuv yuav qhia rau sawv daws txog koj." Khaws koj qhov blog kom huv thiab hwm.

5. Ua neej nyob nrog lub ntiaj teb no

Nws tshwm sim tias tus kws sau paj huam saj zoo, thiab nws suav cov suab lus, tab sis tus nyeem ntawv tsis muaj lub npe nrov goosebumps. Kuv ntseeg tias txhua zaj paj huam tau sau rau qee qhov los ntawm lub zog siab dua, lub cosmos. Thiab tus sau yuav tsum tsim kom muaj kev sib txuas nrog qhov chaw no. Hmoov tsis zoo, tsis muaj universal zaub mov txawv ntawm no. Los ntawm kev paub - koj yuav tsum nyob hauv kev sib raug zoo nrog koj tus kheej thiab lub ntiaj teb nyob ib puag ncig koj, ua tib zoo txais thiab saib xyuas.

6. Tshawb xyuas seb qhov kev xav uas koj tau nthuav tawm puas muaj txiaj ntsig

Nws puas tseem ceeb hauv prose zoo li hauv paj huam? Yog tias koj tshem daim foos, cov ntsiab lus puas yuav nyob?

Cov lus qhia tau ua kom ceev faj. Qhov tseeb, yog tias lub siab thiab lub siab ua haujlwm tag nrho, ces txhua yam yuav ua haujlwm.

Kev sau ntawv zoo yog ib qho txuj ci tseem ceeb, thiab nws tsis yog qhov nyuaj rau kev txhim kho. Txoj kev zoo tshaj plaws yog los ntawm "", chav kawm sau ntawv dawb thiab txias los ntawm cov neeg kho ntawm Lifehacker. Ib txoj kev xav, ntau yam piv txwv thiab homework tos koj. Ua nws - nws yuav yooj yim dua los ua kom tiav cov haujlwm xeem thiab dhau los ua peb tus kws sau ntawv. Subscribe!